英文摘要范例1：
The thesis indicatesthe importance of physicalmodel in physics study．It explains the foundationand the features of the physical model in details．And it also emphasizes the importance of the usageof physical model applied in the teaching processin order to achieve the purpose of trainingstudents’quality of scientific thought．
本文指出了物理模型在物理学习中的重要作用，详细论述了物理模型的建立和特征，强调需重视物理模型在教学中的运用，以达到培养
学生科学思维品质的目的。
这个摘要乍一看没问题，其实句子不多，问题不少。学术论文一般讲述的是方式、方法或者规律、思想理论等内容，英文描述一概尽量用非人称主语(non。personal subject)，这恐怕大家
都知道，但是及物动词的主语的选择，往往是中国人容易忽视的地方。而以上摘要正是中国式摘要的典型。
常用于撰写摘要的英语句型：
2．1．1主题句(Topic sentence)
The purpose of this paper is...·。
The primary goal of this research is...
The intention of this paper is to survey...
The overall objective of this study is...
The emphasis of this study lies in...
This paper aims at providing...
2．1．2论据(Supporting sentences)
The method used in this paper is known as...
The technique applied is referred to as...
The approach adopted widely is called...
This is a working theory based on the ideathat...
The theory is characterized by...
Included in the experiment were...
This formula is verified by...
The experiment used consisted of...
Experiments were performed to check...
2．1．3结论(Concluding sentence)
In conclusion，…
It is concluded that...
The results of the experiment indicated that...
The research work has brought about a discovery of...
The research conducted suggests that...
The fruitful work gives the explanation of…
The findings of the research have led to theconclusion that...
了解了以上常用英语句型，我们可以把上
面的摘要改写为：
The object of this article is to illustrate the importance of physical model in physics study．The foundation and the features of the physical model are exDlained in detail．The emphasis of this study lies in the application of physical model in the teaching process in order to develop students’abilitv to think scientifically．
英文摘要范例2：
This article analyzes the causes and harm of the 0ccupational boredom of college teachers．Here are three solutions：One is to encourage col’lege teaehers to participate and decide．The see‘ond is to show impartiality among college teach。ers．The last one is to free college teachers fromthe pressures of work．
文章分析了高校教师职业倦怠这一现象产生的原因和造成的危害，论述了解决教师职业倦怠可通过提高教师的决策参与度、提升教师的公平感、缓解教师的工作压力等三种方式加以解决。
摘要2显然比摘要1好些，但首句仍然值得商榷。试将摘要2改写如下：
The article aims at analyzing the causes andharm of the occupational boredom among collegeteachers．Here are three solutions：One is to encourage college teachers to participate and decide·The second is to show impartiality among college teachers．The last is to free college teachers from the pressures of work．